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Rebuild World – Chapter 164, The End of The Hunt

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Translator: Athena13

Editor: Silavin

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Akira was running through the mansion, going after Katsuya and Alna. He used the A2D and AAH assault rifles on both of his hands to repel any enemies he encountered. The reason why he swapped to those rifles was because Alpha told him to do so. Since he was using rifles with low firepower, he took more time to fight each and every enemy he encountered.

 

“Say Alpha, my augmented suit is already functioning, right? So why am I using these rifles?”

 

“If you use the other rifles, the firing sound would draw in more enemies. Not to mention, they think you’re a strong opponent. So there’s a good chance that they would give up on killing you, and instead, leaving the rest to that black powered suit. Although it is hard on you, it might be better to let them think that they would have their chance if they keep buying time.”

 

“But it’s slowing me down, you know? At this rate, they might get away from me, no?”

 

Alpha smiled just like usual and said.

 

“It’ll be fine. He has someone slowing him down. So they should not be able to move that fast and he can’t shoot us either. That’s why, I’m sure he’ll have no choice but to fight back rather hardly which would draw more people to him, and that will slow him down even more. We’ll catch up with him sooner or later.”

 

Akira did not stop shooting even while he was talking to Alpha, and after listening to her explanation, he understood why it would be fine to use assault rifles in that situation.

 

Alpha did not lie there, but she also did not tell Akira everything. Even with his assault rifle, he would have a good chance of killing Alna even if Katsuya tried to shield her. Akira did not even notice that fact.

 

—*—*—*—

 

Katsuya peeked out from one of the rooms inside the mansion and shot at an enemy just ahead of him who was carrying a powerful gun. He could hear screams coming from that direction mixed with the gunshots from his own rifle.

 

Katsuya was cornered. He had a stern look on his face, he kept mumbling curses and complaints. He still had Alna next to him, but since she was not using any augmented suit nor had she ever trained or experienced combat, she could not move as fast as him. Then to top it off, more and more enemies were swarming him due to Rogelt’s order. He had to protect Alna in that situation, even for him, he was having a hard time fighting the incoming enemies. Not only was he cornered, but he also had no way to escape. He already had his hands full protecting Alna after evacuating her into that room.

 

Alna looked in pain, seeing how Katsuya was having a hard time protecting her. The kind stranger that she clung to by pure chance back then, and right now, he was still desperately trying to protect her. That thought turned her feelings toward that stranger to love. And the fact that person was trying to protect her because of a mere promise without any benefit at all, only strengthened her feelings for him.

 

Then something clicked inside Alna.

 

“…Katsuya, it’s fine, it doesn’t matter now. Thank you.”

 

Katsuya looked at Alna in surprise.

 

“What do you mean?”

 

“I’m really happy that you came here for me. I think that you’ve already saved me enough. It’s fine now.”

 

“What are you talking about…?”

 

“Just leave me behind and get away from here. Without me slowing you down, you can at least escape from this place alone, right?”

 

Katsuya was dumbfounded while Alna smiled bitterly.

 

“Why would you even say that? It’s fine, don’t worry. If you keep saying something like that, I would get angry, you know?”

 

Katsuya lightly said so to Alna while trying not to worry her. But instead, the smile vanished from Alna’s face which only left her with a pained look. She then started crying and confessing to Katsuya.

 

“I’m sorry. I… I’ve been lying to you… I took it.”

 

“Eh?”

 

“I was the one lying. I stole Akira’s wallet. Then he noticed it and started chasing after me, that was when I bumped into you. I lied to you so that you would protect me… I-I’m really sorry.”

 

Seeing how shocked Katsuya was, Alna smiled bitterly at him.

 

Alna felt really guilty towards Katsuya who was trying to rescue her. But she always thought that if she told him the truth, he would abandon her to her fate. And with Akira ordering a search for her, she would lose her life if she didn’t have Katsuya’s protection. That was why she could not bring herself to tell him. Although she felt guilty about it, she could not deny that she was also happy that he came for her.

 

But now that she was in love with him, she prioritized his life more than her own. If Katsuya died because of her wrongdoing, she would not be able to forgive herself.

 

“I… I’m not worthy of your protection… That’s why… it’s fine.”

 

Alna tried her best to make Katsuya abandon her. She did not even care if that would make him hate her. After she confessed everything, she looked down. She had nothing left. She only smiled mockingly at herself, she was only getting what she had sown.

 

Katsuya, who saw her miserable state, made his resolve and clearly stated.

 

“That doesn’t change anything.”

 

“…Eh?”

 

“As I said, I’ve promised you, so I don’t need any other reason. I won’t take back my promise just because of something like that.”

 

Katsuya smiled, trying to cheer Alna up.

 

“Moreover, well, like, you know, trust is a crucial thing for a Hunter, and I’m aiming to be a great Hunter. That’s why, although it might sound weird, even if you lied to me, I’ll still keep my promise. That’s why I won’t let you die. Even if you don’t want it, I’ll still protect you.”

 

Alna shuddered, emotion flooded her heart.

 

“And also, well, it’s true that stealing is bad, but I don’t think that’s enough of a reason to kill you. I’ll try to talk it out with that guy. So don’t worry, it’ll be fine. You have my promise, so just believe me.”

 

Katsuya said so and smiled kindly. Alna nodded without saying anything, tears were still running down her cheeks as she tried her best to smile.

 

Right at the next moment, Katsuya felt something approaching, so he quickly jumped off.

 

The black powered suit readied its rifle and aimed it at Katsuya. Rogelt used the information sent by his men together with his own information terminal to lock down on Katsuya’s position. Although it was nothing but a crude approximation, with the firepower of his rifle, there was no need for him to snipe precisely.

 

“Damn brat!! Running your mouth like that!! Now die!!!”

 

Fuelled with anger, Rogelt operated his powered suit. A huge bang echoed, his rifle that rivalled the firepower of a tank shot released a warhead straight into the mansion. It easily broke through multiple walls and left one big continuous hole through the mansion.

 

Katsuya was able to barely avoid the warhead. Although he was shocked by the destruction left behind, he immediately went back to secure Alna.

 

“Alna, are you alright?!”

 

Although Alna was lying down on the ground, she was unhurt. She was so horrified that she was not able to immediately reply to Katsuya. But she was at least able to nod to let him know that she was fine.

 

Katsuya’s expression relaxed slightly. He was relieved to know that Alna was fine, but what happened next left him aghast. Akira suddenly jumped into the room through the hole left by that warhead. That sudden change of event caused Katsuya to freeze, and that was enough to dictate the end result.

 

Akira kept Katsuya suppressed with the rifle on his left hand without even looking at him. While Akira’s gaze, as well as the rifle on his right hand, were fixed on Alna. Inside that compressed time perception world where everything was running in slow motion, Akira and Alna locked gazes at each other. Akira pulled down the trigger, showered Alna with bullets and Katsuya had no means to stop him.

 

Akira kept on shooting at Katsuya to keep him suppressed and escaped from the mansion through the hole left by Rogelt. Katsuya was only able to see Akira run off without doing anything.

 

The one that pulled Katsuya back to reality was Alna’s weak voice. The moment he heard it, Katsuya immediately ran toward Alna and confirmed that she had been wounded. Although she was fatally wounded, she was not dead yet. Judging from the locations where she was shot, it seemed that Akira intentionally did that. Katsuya did not notice that far, but judging from the blood on the ground, he knew that Alna did not have much time left.

 

“…M-medicine!!”

 

Katsuya pulled out medicine from his pocket. But he immediately detected enemies coming from the direction of the hole and started shooting at them. He then shouted at those people who were taking cover behind the wall around the hole.

 

“Don’t get in my way!!”

 

He could not treat Alna in this situation. Katsuya understood that and picked her up with his arm and slowly dragged himself away from that place while keeping those men in check. He thought that no enemies would come from the direction where Akira just left, so he tried to retreat there while protecting Alna.

 

Alna coughed out blood and her body gradually turned cold. She would die soon. There was no chance to save her now. Although she understood that, she did not feel fear at all. The happiness of being held by someone she loved and the fact that she would no longer slow him down was stronger. As her vision slowly turned dark, she could see Katsuya still desperately trying to protect her. It made her fall in love deeper with him and regret the fact that Katsuya had a pained look on his face.

 

She felt cold. She wanted to feel warmth during her final moments at least. Alna squeezed the last bit of power that she had to raise up her hand that was already soaked with her own blood. Katsuya who noticed that tried to call her name. Unfortunately, she could no longer hear anything, but even so, she could still feel the warmth on her palm and smiled happily.

 

Alna’s arm gracefully fell. Her life ended there, in the arms of her loved one.

 

Katsuya realized that Alna was gone. He understood that trying to treat her wounds while shooting at the guys attacking them would not help at all. He was extremely frustrated as he softly placed Alna’s body down.

 

Katsuya’s scream echoed through the mansion. Once it died down, he was filled with rage and disappointment for not being able to save her. And in order to remove the main source of the reason why he could not save Alna, he pushed his rare talent to full bloom.

 

Rogelt’s men, who had gathered in that place due to an order from Rogelt, were thunderstruck at how Katsuya suddenly turned so strong as if he was completely a different person. Although they had the upper hand, it did not take long for that to be overturned. The mansion was filled with flying bullets and it was only a matter of time before it stopped.

 

—*—*—*—

 

Akira went through the hole that Rogelt opened and escaped the mansion. He then used the full power of his augmented suit to propel himself up to the rooftop of the mansion, then ran toward the opposite side and jumped down onto the courtyard. He then kept on running towards the entrance.

 

Sheryl was saved and Alna was dead. He no longer had any reason to stay there. The only thing left was to get out from that place alive. Of course, picking a fight against the Ezont family would entail a lot of problems later, but he shelved that for another time. He could take his time thinking about it once he was out of there, Akira kept on running as he thought so.

 

“Alpha, I just want to confirm something though, that girl is dead, right? There’s no way she might be saved, right?”

 

Akira had shot Alna following Alpha’s instruction. He thought that it should be enough to kill her. But he also knew that there was a treatment that could save someone even after that person lost half of his body, or expensive medicines that could save someone from certain death, or many other ways to survive that level of injury. That was why he was not so sure.

 

Alpha smiled and replied.

 

“You’re such a worrywart. Don’t worry, it’s true she might be able to survive using expensive medicine and proper treatment. But I’m sure he wouldn’t have the leeway to do it in that situation.”

 

“But like, is there any reason why I can’t kill her right away there? A shot on her head would guarantee her death, you know…”

 

“If you blow her head or kill her with any means that make it obvious that she’s dead, I’m sure that boy will immediately leave Alna behind and chase after you, to kill you. That’s why we did that. If we let her alive although only for a few seconds, it’s obvious which one that boy would prioritize.”

 

“If that’s the problem, isn’t it easier to just kill that boy or at least wound him too? In that situation back there, although I might not have been able to kill him, I should have been able to at least injure him, right?”

 

“If we did that, the rest of Ezont family’s soldiers would focus on hunting you down. In the worst-case scenario, you would have to fight the whole gang on top of that black powered suit all by yourself.”

 

“Now that you mention it, that does make sense.”

 

Akira agreed with that argument too, so his displeasure and doubt were gone.

 

“Even if that boy tries to chase after you once the girl is dead, he would have to face Ezont family’s men first. So let’s get him to buy some time for us while we escape from this place.”

 

Akira was still running as he glanced back. Inside that mansion, Katsuya should be fighting the Ezont family’s men as well as that black powered suit. As he imagined that scene, he thought that it must be a huge pain in the neck as if it was none of his business.

 

“…Well, even if some of them might still come at me, at least that powered suit won’t be coming for me. Although I do feel bad about it, let’s have him buy us some ti-“

 

Akira immediately frowned. In order for the black powered suit to chase after him from the other side of the mansion, that black powered suit would need to go all the way around the mansion, that was why he thought that there was no way that black powered suit would come for him. And even if it did, it would take some time for it to go around the mansion. But his feeling of safety was immediately betrayed, he could see the black powered suit standing right on the top of the mansion.

 

“You gotta be kidding me!?”

 

“He must have used the full power of his powered suit to get it on top of the mansion. Although, in order to do that, it seems that he had no other choice but to leave some of its heavy weapons behind. It has no ranged weapon at all, that melee weapon is the only weapon that it has at the moment.”

 

“That’s not even the problem here!!”

 

The black powered suit jumped down and landed with a big bang. It then jumped with a power that was enough to shake the ground as it headed right toward Akira.

 

“You damn brat!! Do you think I’ll let you get away?!!”

 

The black powered suit moved around while reading its chainsaw, the countless teeth of its chainsaw raised a deafening sound as it started spinning.

 

Akira’s augmented suit increased its output to its limit as if it did not care how much burden it would put on Akira’s body. Akira just ignored the stinging pain from both of his legs as he kept on running as fast as he could. But of course, it was no match against the high-speed powered suit. The distance between him and the powered suit was slowly shrinking.

 

“Alpha! Can we do something about that thing?!”

 

Unlike Akira who obviously looked very worried, Alpha only looked slightly concerned. She then casually said to him.

 

“It can’t be helped then, let’s fight it.”

 

“Are you serious?!”

 

Akira was wide-eyed, but Alpha smiled and replied.

 

“Get yourself ready, you at least have a better chance fighting it rather than keep running from it like this.”

 

Akira smiled wryly.

 

“Alright, I get it! If resolving myself is enough to do something about it, I’ll resolve myself as much as you want!! That’s my responsibility, after all!!”

 

“And the rest would be my responsibility. So just leave the rest to me. We don’t have time to waste, let’s prepare ourselves before it catches on to us.”

 

Akira was running at high speed when he used his augmented suit to immediately stop himself. Right at the same time, he reloaded a new magazine to his CWH anti-material rifle, and then threw it down on the ground together with his A4WM automatic grenade launcher, and DVTS minigun.

 

He then took out the foldable blade that he had obtained from the mansion, grabbed it with both his hands and expanded it. Once it was fully unfolded, its bladed started to give a faint bluish glow.

 

Right in front of Akira, the black powered suit raised its chainsaw while blazing straight at him. Seeing that, Akira took a deep breath and readied himself.

 

Rogelt then yelled from inside the powered suit.

 

“Die!!!”

 

The black powered suit swung its powerful chainsaw down with a huge force. Akira, who was inside the slow-motion world, swung his foldable blade as vigorously as he could.

 

The moment their blades made contact, blue light flashed from Akira’s blade, it then turned into dust and carried away by the wind. While at the same time, the force of the collision threw Akira’s body back.

 

With that one exchange, although Akira was fighting a powered suit with only his own flesh and his augmented suit, it was able to push the black powered suit back.

 

Normally, it would be nothing strange if that one attack crushed Akira. There were 2 reasons why it did not. First of all, Rogelt had spent most of his energy on fighting all the powered suits and tanks in the previous fights, because of that, his powered suit could not exert its full power. While the other reason was because Alpha modified the blade to use all its available power for one swing.

 

The only thing that maintained the blade’s sharpness was its energy. Due to modification from Alpha, it used all of its energy in one go, way above what that blade could withstand. Thanks to that, it increased its destructive power to its utmost limit. Although it turned into dust right after that, it was able to withstand that exchange against a powered suit. And with the help of Alpha’s support, Akira swung it with the technique that rivalled a swordmaster.

 

While his body was blown backwards, Akira quickly grabbed his DVTS minigun and CWH anti-material rifle and immediately started to shoot using his DVTS minigun. Although most of his bullets hit the powered suit, it barely caused any damage at all.

 

Rogelt was surprised by what happened but immediately regained his composure. After reassessing his situation, he readied himself and quickly went for another attack. Unlike Akira who had lost his blade, the black powered suit still had its weapon just fine, and it was powerful enough to easily crush Akira.

 

From the external camera of his powered suit, Rogelt could see Akira aiming another shot at him. This time, Akira was using his CWH anti-material rifle.

 

Akira pulled the trigger, the bullet that was shot in a point-blank range hit the black powered suit and released a loud bang. Right at the next moment, Rogelt immediately lost the power output of his powered suit. Akira’s shot had destroyed his powered suit’s energy generator.

 

When the powered suit stopped moving, Akira nimbly manoeuvred away while picking up the rest of his weapons before running away from that place.

 

Akira was running like a madman when he threw a question to Alpha.

 

“Alpha! That should be enough to stop that thing, right?!”

 

“To be more precise, you just sniped its generator and temporarily stopped it. If it has a spare generator, it can immediately swap its generator and start moving again. So I don’t think stopping it is the right word to use in this situation.”

 

“Wha-!? Even that wasn’t enough?!”

 

“It’s a matter of fighting a tank only with an augmented suit, or like fighting a powered suit only with a human body. The power gap is simply too big. But even if it has a spare generator, it’ll take some time to replace the destroyed generator. So you should have enough time to run away, that is, as long as you don’t stop because you’re tired or something.”

 

“Alright alright, I get it!”

 

Akira smiled bitterly and started running again. He then jumped over the fence with the help of his augmented suit, and just kept on running away from Ezont Family’s base. He finally was able to escape that place.

 

—*—*—*—

 

The rear side of the black powered suit opened, Rogelt came out from it. His face was deep red, he looked absolutely furious. He kept looking at the direction where Akira ran away and mumbled.

 

“…That brat… He got away, huh!”

 

Rogelt jumped off from his powered suit and checked the hole on his powered suit. It was the hole left by the bullet that destroyed the powered suit’s generator.

 

[…I bet it’s a powerful anti-force field armour bullet. It was able to pierce through my powered suit’s force field armour after all. Otherwise, it would have been impossible to do that.]

 

As Rogelt had predicted, Akira actually used the anti-force field armour bullet that he bought as a lucky charm and a trump card. It was a high-quality bullet that cost him 5,000,000 Aurum per shot. He only bought one bullet just to be safe in case he had no other choice but to go against a powerful monster, like that one huge creature that he fought back in the Seranthal building. Akira himself did not expect that he would be using that bullet so quickly.

 

[But still, even if he shot that in a point-blank range, normally, that would not be enough to destroy my generator, so how…]

 

Rogelt frowned, he did not want to believe the explanation that came up in his head.

 

Unlike armour plating, the force field armour of the black powered suit was the type that continuously consumed energy and extended out its force field. Since it would consume too much energy if he kept moving, Rogelt usually only stood still when he was not in a fight. And even in the middle of a battle, he would lower the force field for parts that were unlikely to get shot in order to save energy. Otherwise, it would consume too much energy to maintain.

 

Focusing the force field armour only at the points where they were receiving shots was something that only skilled users could do, and one of the indicators of a high-quality control device was whether it could accurately predict incoming shots and only expand the forced field in those locations.

 

But this automatic adjustment from the control device usually had some particular quirks. In some cases, it might cause the force field to focus only on one point and leave another location more open for an attack.

 

Rogelt remembered how Akira used his DVTS minigun to shoot a barrage on his powered suit. If it was in order to damage his powered suit, then it would have been a pointless action, but what if he did that to manipulate the automatic adjustment control of Rogelt’s powered suit. If Akira did that to focus the force field armour in one place and open a weak point in another place to shoot at, if that was all true, then it would explain how Akira was able to snipe the generator.

 

Although it was possible theoretically, it was actually almost impossible to execute. It would have been possible with the combination of a huge amount of bullets and a powerful information-gathering device that could precisely calculate the small changes in the force field armour in order to create a concentrated force field and opening a weak spot. But in order to do that, Akira would have to analyze and calculate a huge amount of information, which would have been impossible.

 

Rogelt rejected the solution to his question that came up in his mind. He then lightly shook his head, just to blame that on his bad luck, and decided to stop thinking about it.

 

Rogelt shook off his thoughts from what just happened and looked at his powered suit one more time. Seeing how his prided black powered suit was rendered to that state, anger started to well up again.

 

“That brat, wrecking my powered suit like this. I’ll definitely kill him next time.”

 

“Unfortunately, you won’t be able to do that.”

 

A woman’s voice abruptly replied to Rogelt. Rogelt immediately pulled up his rifle and released some shots in the direction of that voice.

 

Although there was no one there, his bullets ricocheted and made a sound as if they bounced off a metallic object. A blade was floating in the air there. When the owner of that blade took off her camouflage, it revealed a girl smiling amusedly. She had a metallic cyborg body covered under a camouflaging coat, both of her arms were armed with blades, it was Neria.

 

Neria and Rogelt made eye contact. Right at the next moment, Neria suddenly dashed and closed the distance between them.

 

Rogelt made a rough approximation of how strong his opponent was by judging from how she moved just now and how she blocked his shots. He quickly decided that his rifle would not do him any good and threw it away, instead, he grabbed 2 knives behind his hip and readied himself. When he unsheathed his knives, blades extended out and they turned into swords.

 

Rogelt had talent in CQC, that was why, during the battle against other powered suits, he was always using melee weapons, and of course, that talent also translated very well when fighting against another human. As a matter of fact, his skill with the blade allowed him to distinguish himself in the eastern district where guns were a norm.

 

Nelia and Rogelt exchanged blows for just a split second, by the end of that exchange, they were standing past each other with their backs facing each other.

 

“See, it would be impossible for you.”

 

Nelia smiled and said so, behind her, Rogelt was sliced into 4 pieces with a cross centered on his throat. Not only did he get beheaded, but his head and body were also split cleanly into two halves. His body parts fell down and painted the ground red in blood.

 

Now that her job was finished, Nelia looked in the direction where Akira ran off to. She smiled amusedly which even looked like she was ecstatic.

 

“But still, although it hasn’t been that long since the last time, to think that he has become strong enough to defeat a powered suit with only an augmented suit. It was really unfortunate that I wasn’t able to seduce him back then.”

 

Nelia once again activated the optical camouflage of her coat. Her figure was slowly swallowed into the scenery and vanished completely.

 

“It would be great if I can get another chance to try to seduce him, although, it would be hard to do that in my current situation. Seriously though, what should I do with you?”

 

She did not feel anything wrong with seducing someone that she would try to kill 5 seconds later. Nelia, who had such a distorted way of thinking, had a regretful expression on her beautiful face. But that face also quickly vanished from the views, leaving behind the nonfunctional powered suit and the dismembered corpse of its user.

 

—*—*—*—

 

Haurias, the gang that was at war against the Ezont family. Inside its base, in its boss’ room. The report from Haurias’ soldiers echoed through the room.

 

“Boss! These guys are too strong!! We’ll be wiped out at this rate!! Tell us what to do!! Boss!! Are you there?! Whether we group up or retreat, just give us something!! Dammit!! Is it not connected!? What the heck is going on here?!!”

 

Their boss was unable to give them any orders, after all, he had a bullet on his head and he was already dead.

 

Haurias already sent most of its men to attack the Ezont family. Its boss was left only with a handful of bodyguards in the base. And those bodyguards, like their boss, were already dead.

 

Both Haurias and Ezont family had some similarities. First of all, both of them were huge gangs with a lot of members, the boss of the respective gang held a ton of influence. Because of that, it was extremely difficult for the members of those gangs to rise up against their boss. So right now, with both sides left with no boss, their men had no other choice but to fight to the death, save for some who ran away at the very last second.

 

Ezont Family and Haurias, the two goliath gangs in the lower district of Kugamayama city. With the loss of their boss and their men, the money that they spent in that battle, both of them were effectively destroyed in a single night.

 


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21 thoughts on “Rebuild World – Chapter 164, The End of The Hunt”

  1. Fucking hell… TBH I honestly prefer how the manga (and from what im understanding that also means the LN?) handled the pickpocket issue. Flame me all u want about how I “don’t understand” or whatever but this was just totally fucking ridiculous of Akira. It was downright malicious and absurd to go to such insane lengths to kill a FUCKING PICKPOCKET. Yeah Trashuya kept making the situation worse and escalating things but ffs it was a PICKPOCKET. I get Akira is fucked in th head and all but jesus christ how many chapters did we waste on this?!

    Dont get me wrong I fuck hella hard with this series, I do, but this whole thing was just.. so fucking forced and ridiculous.

  2. Both Akira and Katsuya’s motivations makes no damn sense in this arc. Why would Akira would go so far to spend over 50m aurum just to kill this pickpocket? Not to mention all the danger involved. He was even thinking about cutting ties with Elena and Sara over this. He was always a psycho but he usually had his priorities right. Not this time.

    Meanwhile Katsuya initially saved Alna partially to spite Akira and now he can’t stop because of a promise. What if another slum girl runs to him for help? Would he go so far for some girl he barely knows again and again because of heroism? To the point where he would kill people who weren’t even his enemies? Makes no fucking sense again.

    This whole arc just feels…forced

  3. Finally over huh. As all the other people I really don’t like this arc. But I think that I disagree with most of the criticisms that people have about this arc in the comments here.

    Frankly, it doesn’t really matter that much about the morality, or rationality of the actions of the 2 protags. Its been well established that they are bonkers and deeply flawed individuals, both from a moral and a logical perspective. Thats not necessarily the problem here. The problem also isn’t that they are so obsessed over a mere pickpocket slum-girl. Even Sheryl is a slum-girl, and pickpockets can be central characters as well

    The main problem IMO is that Alna barely exists as a character, forget about being a character that is fleshed out enough to become the central part of dozens of chapters. She seems to exist solely as a convenient tool for Katsuya and Akira to become involved in a conflict, with perhaps their opposing ideologies clashing. She gets no depth, she gets no organic growth, honestly most of the time she just barely registers as an annoyance. All the 3 characters don’t get anything out from the whole situation even until the end of this whole arc.

    If the author wanted to kill her, it should have been done much faster. Given so much focus was placed on this incident, it would have made much more sense for the 3 involved characters to reflect on their actions, think about their condition and situation, and make appropriate settlements and compromises. But in the end, after all that hullabaloo, we get a very weak ending. Katsuya doesn’t reflect on his mistake about blindly believing someone just because she is a scared girl running from a boy he hates, Alna doesn’t really repents ,apologises or even admits her sins(she only confessed because she wanted Katsuya to escape and because they hit a dead end. Akira doesn’t learn to move on from his past trauma and insecurity, and become more flexible in his approach.

    Many other things are problematic in the arc honestly, like Alna strolling back into the slums even though she knew people are out to get her, twice. The conflict between the gangs being shoved in there forcefully, but honestly overall it’s bad writing, maybe even shitty writing. Someone said LN heavily edited this arc, and that’s totally understandable

  4. That was just SUPERB!!!! Alna ending was the exact depiction of this work. I’m really, really, really satisfied with it. I know that giving such a minor character so much light was kinda weird, but I really liked it because it served to show how bleak Akira’s mindset is.

  5. Yep she’s dead. This arc is indeed frustrating. But for people whom still contradicts with the kill or not to kill situation in this arc. This probably won’t help but, from my perspective every life were indeed precious but being able make it worth it’s value is to is up to the person itself.

    Even if we tried to live our life alone, this world still filled with a lot of people. Because of that, sooner or later we would end up tied with other people business directly or not, whether is good or bad, and unfortunately for her it was the latter.

  6. So Katsuya isn’t dead and instead gets to pretend like this scene is sad or he somehow suffered more than the dozens of people he got killed over protecting a thief he barely knows. Yeah, Ima give this a few chapters to see a better apology from Sara and Elena and then drop this. I actually started reading from wanting to see what happened after finding the Manga. Happy to learn I’m more frustrated by the story than enjoying it. Ever since Katsuya appeared I just wanted to see him die. He’s one dimensionial character is too hatable other wise and this is exactly what I expected if he survived.

  7. Man I shouldn’t have read the spoiler of Katsuya seeing Sheryl hug Akira. Now I’m always expecting it, when Sheryl, Akira and Katsuya is in the same arc.

  8. It’s honestly insane how much crazy shit went down all because this dumb girl decided to steal from Akira lol. Akira’s obsession with killing Alna honestly felt forced. Like it became even more ridiculous as the arc went on as he went from “If I see her or run into her I’ll kill her” to “I can’t sleep at night knowing she still breathes”.

    1. Yea, this arc was so frustrating. I thought Akira was a more chill guy than this.. He forgave Shiori for almost killing him but he cant let go a damn pickpocket??
      Ngl it really does feel forced. And It was disappointing that killing Alna was higher on his priority list than Sheryl. Not bc I like her, but bc she should’ve been more important in this situation.
      But anyways, mans was really acting like she killed his mom or sumthing. It was def not that deep (¬_¬;)

      1. 1. Shiori actually apologized instead of hiding behind someone and treated him for it. Had she not done that, and city management paying him to change his history, he’d do the same to her as he did Alna. If Alna gave the money back, she would still be alive.
        2. The situation was different, no one knows about what happened between him and Shiori, except the few due to the changes made on his record.
        3. The situation with Shiori did not leave a stain on his reputation like with Alna, which proceeded to indirect cause the death of a couple people.
        4. It was a bit force, spending 50+ mil to get the job done lmao. But he got it done instead of backing off again.
        5. If you recalled what he mentioned about a time limit, Katsuya was trying to get her into Dankram, if that happened, he would no longer be able to get to her. No, Sheryl is not more important in that situation, she was the reason why they were there in the first place. All she had to do was let mc know where she was going, considering it would’ve been a pretty big deal for the gang.
        6. People hold value differently, for mc, he’s a poor kid from the slums, that event just reminded him of how weak he was, especially after the rumors popped up. To move forward, this needed to happen.

        1. Dude, I need more readers like you, it really hurt my brain reading all this comments that akira is stupid for doing all this for just a little bit of money and blaming akira of all that happened, akira is selfish and foolish for doing all this, but he has a reason, he is a kid who basically all his life struggled to survive, he wants to do anything in his power so that his situation doesn’t return to the way it was, that’s why he can’t let go of her since it simbolizes akira is weak and still can go back to be a weak slum boy, for me she needed to die, so that akira can move forward and have nothing holding him back from growing stronger, the people that don’t understand that are brain dead

    2. It makes sense. What was forced was hard it was. For one, to Akira the money he earned meant everything. It’s different to those of us who never lived not knowing where their next meal would come from. It meant the world that he was finally able to earn money with Alpha and pull himself out of the hellish life he was living. Every single cent he earned meant a lot to him. For two, Akira didn’t get super angry into Katsuya agitated him by saying it was his fault for being a weak hunter. He internalized that and even after backing away used it to get stronger. Three, Akira HAD let it go. Unlike Katsuya he learned from the situation and grew as a hunter (well, he was at least able to stop pickpockets). The first time he stopped a pick pocket after Alna he was even fine with letting live. It’s clear had she given him the money back then this mess wouldn’t exist. The big thing is that the situation blew up because of the rumor Katsuya’s interventions caused or allowed to happen. Innocent children in Sheryl’s gang died as a result of it weakening Akira’s image. Akira himself was exposed to more danger with pickpockets and people attacking him when they normally wouldn’t. Akira even had to deal with 2 of his 3 only friends betraying his trust. But honestly, Akira clearly didn’t care too much about any of that. It just added fuel to the fire. The main thing was it destroyed his hard earned reputation. For someone who had been at the bottom and worked his butt off (even with Alpha’s support he’s constantly training and risking his life), that meant everything to him. The fact that the rumor caused by a single pick pocket escaping made everyone look down on him and call him weak was unforgivable. It’s one thing if it’s true or something he believes himself, but why should he stomach a bad rumor because one idiot escaped?

  9. This reeks of Omega. The whole time, Alpha was against putting Akira through this whole thing. But the moment Katsuya was blackmailed with Alna being a hostage, she accepted it and helped as best as she could. I honestly wished Katsuya was captured because then he would be restrained and possibly cut off from Omega’s help prioritizing Alpha’s processing instead.

  10. Latest chapter huh. Oh well, Imma wait for the next upload. Akira may need to spread some false information about Katsuya later on. Its gonna be bullet hell if he doesn’t get the city management to temporarily ban Katsuya from carrying weapons in the city limits.

  11. Thx 4 the chapter, i dont feel empathy towards arna cuz both are at fault, they will never admit they are wrong! Until its late, how predictable This drama mislead, ignore akira as victim making him like a bad guy that trash just want to satisfy his arrogant ego he only listen if your a girl he doesnt need a reason simply put back then he feel victory when akira backdown and mock him its funny “talk it over with akira”? Lol promise? cringy~ excuse to cover his mistake his impression on me is Negative i dont really like him…its little disappointing that LN akira came there to save sheryl he just got piss off for they looking down on him while in Wn not feeling motivated to save sheryl but enthusiasm to KILL ARNA makes kibayashi laugh and likes akira so much.

  12. Nice he kill alna, katsuya is quite a good person. But if he leave alna behind after all that trouble, the amount of time and ammo he wasted will make hime look stupid and easier for mizuha to manipulate.

    1. Katsuya really isn’t a good person. He’s a self righteousness jerk who causes trouble for everyone around him and takes no responsibility and suffers no consequences. Had he actually mediated between Alna and Akira this wouldn’t have happened. Had he not agitated Akira into picking a fight by insulting him when things almost ended peacefully this wouldn’t have happened. Instead he let it get to a point where a rumor spread that FORCES Akira, who had even moved on and learned from the event, to kill Alna. The rumor Katsuya caused put Akira and Sheryl’s gang in more danger (actually several of the CHILDREN in her gang died because of it). Not to mention even beyond that, Katsuya legit weighed the life of a random stranger he met (who everyone around him knew was lying to him, but no one said anything because the world revolves around Katsuya I guess) above dozens upon dozens of others. The 4 who originally came to pick her up were just following orders and doing everything possible to avoid harming people not involved. Katsuya didn’t care though. Akira analyzed the situation at the gate and was willing to wait for confirmation and to peacefully negotiate. Katsuya immediately made assumptions and decided to shoot first and ask questions never. His intervention literally caused a gang war that got so many members who were just following orders dead. A lot of this is Viola being pure evil, but Katsuya is at best an idiot jerk. Had it been Akira alone, her plans would have failed because even Akira is a more peaceful person (which is saying something).

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